In the modern era, the world has become a small village; therefore, It is easy to share any kind of information among nations. Whilst some people are of the belief that sharing information at scientific and business field is a worthy idea, others have a diverse view. I am of the view that spreading any kind of information between countries is quintessential for global development. In this essay, both perspectives along with my opinion will be demonstrated before reaching a conclusion.
In the modern era, the world has become a small village; therefore, It is easy to share any kind of information among nations. Whilst some people are of the belief that sharing information at scientific and business field is a worthy idea, others have a diverse view. I am of the view that spreading any kind of information between countries is quintessential for global development. In this essay, both perspectives along with my opinion will be demonstrated before reaching a conclusion.
On one hand, scientific and academic knowledge is beneficial for all countries around the global. In other words, If researchers shared their result in public, It would help at many aspects of people's lives. For instance, the researcher who discovered the medicine of diabetes; he shared it with all the world; Therefore, it becomes available for all people by a low price. Moreover, If educators share their information and knowledge, they will assist the developing countries in their way in the development; It will remove and reduce the cultural conflict. Hence, Having given this example, It suggested that global information at medical and academic research should be spread among nations.
On the other hand, there is some confidential information which cannot spread or share. As an illustration, Information about weapons and dangerous products should not be spread by researchers; If this information goes to the wrong people, it will be harmful. For example, some terrorists can acquire information about produce weapons such as bombs, and they can use it in bad ways. Thus, some information should be confidential to safe world.
It can be concluded that it is important to share any kind of information which helps in some fields such as medical and academic research. It is recommended that authorities have to choose which information should be spread in order to safe the generations' lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21172638436 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9841329378 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527687296417 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6012657974 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.666666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42014278045 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159133725141 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148595436397 0.0667982634062 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279556778534 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153466838259 0.056905535591 270% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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