Money is important in most people’s lives. Although some people think it is more important than others.
What do you feel are the right uses of money? What other factors are important for a good life?
Money holds a significance place in everyone’s life, but it cannot bring peace and satisfaction in we need for our wellbeing. Most of the people believe that money is most valuable asset for them as compare to other necessities of life. In my opinion, having right amount of money to fulfill basic needs and utilized in proper manner can help us to enjoy our lives.
Some people think money is an ultimate goal and achievement to spend better life. First of all, if money is utilized in appropriate way, for example understanding the needs of family like, to provide better living environment, good education for children which will help them to become responsible and decent human being. Next, to use it for leisure and fun activities for kids, it will help them to learn about society and how to live in. One of the best usages of money is to help people who are in real need. Charity and voluntarily helping others will bring immense pleasure in lives. To keep society and communities in good shape money has to be rotated to fulfill needs of all people.
On the other hand, along with money there are several other elements to spend healthy and prosper life. Health is one of the most significant factors, as one cannot enjoy money or any other aspect of life if health is compromised. Apart from that, socially activeness and communication with people in the surroundings, having relations in society is an ultimate gratification one can have.
To conclude, money is one of the elements to lead content life but it’s not the only factor. The right usage to fulfill basic needs and keeping other factors intact contributes towards worthy living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, well, apart from, as to, for example, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86315789474 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64452022621 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550877192982 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5755153877 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277850837342 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108106372522 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554722994908 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175527211858 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351145971945 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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