Urban migration is a term which has been discussed widely earlier than before, people are moving from rural areas to the cities for better job opportunities and better life. We can see this trend is very high among persons from agricultural background mainly because of the recent changes in this sector.
There are number of consequencies if this trend continues. Firstly, cities are already stuffed with large number of population, people find it difficult to get place to live. Furthermore, if the population is concentrated only in metropolitan areas, that will eventually leads to economical in balance in various parts of the country. Secondly, this overpopulation in municipal areas creates pollution issues and over exploitation resources. For instance, we can see majority of the worlds largest cities like Beinjing , Newyork are suffering from air and water pollution problems greatly.
To tackle this situation, governments should spend their fund equally in developing basic amenities around the country. they should not only concentrate in cities when they plan their budget. Moreover government should provide adequate support to the farmers in terms of money and resources. They are suffering huge losses and find it difficult to survive in this sector because of the low returns from this field. In addition, government should encourage industrialist and manufactures to open their facilities in rural areas as well. That will definitely creates more job opportunities and people will stay their home land rather than migrating to civic areas.
To conclude, Urban movement is the problem which faced by almost all the metropolis in the world. In order to solve governments should act wisely. Otherwise they face some serious problems that may affect the country's economy as well as the well being of its people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.375 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80776605949 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607638888889 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6448095989 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.75 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176072673922 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503270500462 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429179089532 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997484008672 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479036925034 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.