More and more companies are allowing employees to work at home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, with the advent of computers and the widespread use of the internet, working at home become popular among workers around the world. This could bring both benefits and drawbacks for people’s development.
On the one hand, employees who work from their accommodation would have more hours to complete the task, especially those whose house are quite far from their offices, they can distance themselves from unexpected factors such as traffic congestion which can cause them to be late. Because they spend more time working hard, their performances get better. Besides that, due to working in the house, workers would have a private atmosphere and feel comfortable and free, so they pay attention to the duties. Moreover, in modern society, almost staffs are lack of break to eat breakfast which is the most important meal of day, so working from home is a viable solution to help employees improve their health.
On the other hand, despite the aforementioned advantages, working from home is also causes a lot of losses for a number of reasons. Firstly, numerous staffs become lazier because they have more hours at home and they often wake up late. Secondly, they would miss the desired opportunities to gain experience from colleagues, boost their soft skills such as communication and teamwork, which is really important for the development of everyone. Finally, due to lack of communication with people, they become afraid to interact with others and gradually they would be autistic.
In conclusion, I believe that work-from-home jobs brings both advantage and disadvantage for employees as well as employers depend on the specific situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25563909774 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81675049101 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601503759398 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3988848529 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.090909091 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174395191266 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707587206398 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401194180942 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108086093227 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132582850099 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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