More and more people today are becoming overly dependent on the internet and phones.
Is this a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, a great number of people across the globe cannot image their lives without mobiles and the Internet. From my perspective, although these technological advances are one of the valuable inventions of the humankind, the excessive dependency on them may be considered as a disadvantage.
The main reason of it is that uncontrolled usage of the global net leads to the Internet addiction and a person starts to spend a huge amount of time online forgetting about their duties and the life as a whole. In addition, there are plenty of violent videos and negative information in it, which is constantly bombarding netizens. As a result, many of them may develop depression, and suicidal rates will increase. For example, my younger brother used to binge-watch to the Game of Thrones series and after a while, he had become aggressive and moody.
Somebody might argue that these technologies let people stay in touch for 24/7 and communicate instantly with any of remote places on the Earth. However, it may create a false feeling of unity and inclusion into something bigger than a person is. Meanwhile, I think modern people need more quality time with somebody important for them. It should be face-to-face communication without any distraction by social media. To illustrate, being quite into social media myself, I realized that I miss that time when my friends and I did not have mobiles and spent a wonderful time together.
In conclusion, being overly dependent on mobile and the Internet connection is a negative tendency because people become media addicted, more depressed and surprisingly, isolated from each other.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16917293233 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8976184271 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639097744361 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1305350715 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.583333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186571746065 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595601906624 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812125356794 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127803095028 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102444515054 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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