More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons for this? It is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, purchasing well-known products such as clothes, automobiles and other products is getting popular. In my opinion, there are several reasons caused this trend and it may take good impacts for not only personal but also country’s development.
Firstly, people have become interested in famous brands of products because these products are good in design and quality. One clear example for this is even there are many people who concede that Apple products overpriced for normal people. However, it is still getting much interested from high-class and middle-class people alike who are ready pay out for this because of outstanding design and endurable usage ability. Secondly, people who want to own famous brand of products want to prove themselves. It is very popular in Asia, if someone get successful in their career, they are admired by someone else by showing luxurious, expensive, well-known brand of clothes. Due to this, these people may give more effect to others people.
In my point of view, it is positive for country development. To start with, the more branding products consume, the economics is more growing up. For instance, at a decade before in Vietnam, people seemed to abandon expensive and luxurious products because they thought that these products were not accurate with the quality. Nevertheless, at 2000s, Vietnam had joined World Trade Organization, the products that are from oversea were imported to Vietnam much more. At the time, people may use products with good quality from famous brands, this changed Vietnamese consuming perspective. After ten years, the Vietnam economics has climbed to top of economics of South East Asia.
In conclusion, after seeking for rationales of trend, which people are into purchasing famous brands of products, I concede this trend is caused by that people like to use quality, endurable products and although they want to show their success by showing their luxurious, expensive clothes. However, I think this is still good for both individual and social development.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 547, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32923076923 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69314272765 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3340691212 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.25 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5625 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282721856956 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101684788969 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593838315496 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174708012189 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508656174435 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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