Most people believe that the best way to spend holidays is by going abroad, staying at a hotel and enjoying the local attractions. Do you agree or disagree with this statement. Give your own opinion and include relevant examples.
Globalization has changed the definition of has changed the definition of holiday nowadays. Many intellectuals hunger after extravagant holidays at lavish hotels in foreign countries. However, my inclinations do not accord the thought in the myriad way that can be elaborated as follows.
First of all, it is universally accepted that holidays are the break off to get rejuvenated from the routine wear and tear. There are ample of options available to us that can help us to get relax in small budget. For instance, attending crash courses to explore our hobbies like swimming, yoga and so on. Exploring hobbies will not only enrich individual but also improve the mental and physical health hurt due to regular stress and strain. Secondly, not every person can afford the international trips as most of the population in any country belongs to the middle class whose average spendthrift may afford such trips once in a lifetime. Hence, enjoying local attractions and culture are also worth to pay attention to get the change during holidays. Lastly, spending time with oneself or family can also be the great source of healing energy.For example, a small campsite or picnic at the beach or at the garden with the family can also do a miracle.
On the other hand, there is an optimum proportion of elite class who considers abroad trip as a part of their status-quo. So, they used to visit international destinations to symbolize themselves in the society. More to add it, many famous personalities face difficulties in spending holidays locally because of their fan followings. Such as famous actors, politicians, singers, athletes etc.So, celebrities are like to spend their quality time alone in a strange place abroad.
By summing up all the above points, I strongly believe that holidays should give you refreshments rather than the headache of spending behind some over budgeted foreign visits. So, there are plenty of opportunities available in our surrounding to spare our quality period of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15548780488 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84629907538 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643292682927 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4198070252 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.6875 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151413291147 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402491734493 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377740125762 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855382535395 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0118846506619 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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