Most people believe that the best way to spend holidays is by going abroad staying at a hotel and enjoying the local attractions Do you agree or disagree with this statement Give your own opinion and include relevant examples

In some countries, people believe that the holidays can be well spent in other countries. Even they opt to stay in a hotel or any other type of accommodation and visit the local places of interest to know about the country and its history. I agree that it is the best way to spend our vacation with our loved ones. The following essay will elucidate this statement with supporting information.

First of all, most people wish to explore other countries and it is one of the dreams from their childhood. Because of getting to know their culture by mingling with locale and by visiting the well-known monuments and museums located in the place, people prefer at holidays abroad. For example, I always wanted to visit to city of China where Buddha was born, brought up and the tree where he attained his enlightenment. Thus, the place serves as proof of Chinese heritage and depicts their culture. Besides that, visiting holidays in abroad serves as an opportunity to visit foreign locations through different modes of transports such as flight and cruise. Hence, most people like to spend their holidays at other countries.

Furthermore, few other countries have unique experiences that is not available in the host country. Activities such as scuba-diving, marine driving and para-gliding are available only in Asian countries and not available elsewhere. Hence, people from other parts of the world prefer to visit Asia to enjoy these activities. Another advantage is our revenue for our tourism department by welcoming more and more tourist from countries abroad.

To sum up, even though spending holidays abroad has some trivial challenges such as language, food and cost, it is one of the key things to know about a country and its history by being in person. It is my hope that our country concentrates more on these tourist attractions that enhances our tourism profitability.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, thus, well, for example, such as, first of all, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04792332268 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71723690063 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568690095847 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0725112954 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.75 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181370244319 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061521329049 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579024084372 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107923020923 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732176018131 0.056905535591 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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