Nowadays, individual take their family with them to abroad whenever they go for business trip
Owing to globalization, international business tours have become popular. Many businessmen prefer taking families while having work assignments in different country. This is a positive trend although has some drawbacks which will be discussed in this essay.
On the positive side, knowing the foreign country benefits the family. In other words, families interact and make new friends, learning the distinct culture, tradition and life-style of people living there. This experience is incredible and adds to the knowledge and wisdom, which definitely cannot be gained from books or staying in home country. Secondly, for the employees who have long onshore assignments can work efficiently when accompanied with spouse and children. In this case, he will not feel home-sick, resulting into more focus at job. For instance, Sheena got on site in Germany, and staying 5 years was trouble free as family was together.
Another benefit of taking family is about learning foreign language. People spend years to learn foreign language still they cannot learn it because they do not use it frequently. However, if the person moves to country where he need to speak foreign language to communicate, he will definitely get fluent in it because of speaking it often with native people. The Indians in England are known to speak English effectively although they never learned in school is the best example of learning foreign language in foreign land. Thus, it is good for family to get an opportunity to learn different language if they are moving abroad for work.
On the other hand, some people argue that it is costly as the family shifts to other country. According to them, only the person on assignment can complete the work and return, instead of taking the family. Even the organization's funds on sponsoring the family would be saved.
In conclusion, I pen down saying that although the family settlement involves some budget, it is still worthwhile to take the members during the onshore work visits. This would forge the family due to incredible knowledge it gains by knowing the country, and would enable the employee to work efficiently without worrying of family in home country. Thus, for overall benefit of individual and the family, it is advisable to visit the new place together.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1929.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17158176944 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65325085458 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541554959786 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3250602202 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.45 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.65 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191889658763 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567678376583 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454486332403 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100882267977 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234224040308 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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