Nowadays international tourism is the biggest industry worldwide. Unfortunately, sometimes it creates tension between people from different cultures, instead of better understanding. Why do you think it is happening and how can it be improved?
In modern times there has been a surge in foreign travel all over the world. However, this surge has many times led to misunderstandings between visiting travellers and natives of the countries due to cultural differences and language barriers.
To begin with, the booming travel industry attracts millions of travellers to various countries globally. This, therefore, creates an atmosphere of interaction between different cultures. Additionally, several cultural practices could be interpreted differently according to their country of origin. For example, showing your thumb sign is interpreted as a good luck gesture in American tradition, however, in Iran, it will be an insult. Secondly, the language barrier has been seen as a major reason that travellers are unable to interact with the locals. This creates confusion in terms of communication between the individuals.
Pursuing this further, the visiting individuals must be better informed about the country of visit, to avoid certain problems during their visit. Furthermore, The government must also provide booklets of information at the airports regarding their varied practices, which might not be familiar to the visitor. This provides a better understanding to the visitors about the practices they might encounter are not aware of. No one would want to offend their hosts.
In conclusion, tourism brings the world closer and travel should be made easier if there are fewer setbacks due to cultural or communication barriers. Travellers could visit any country without hassle if they are better informed and have more information distributed by the government to help global citizens to travel comfortably and with no misunderstandings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62162162162 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0791160841 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610038610039 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4457790158 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1185292576 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452592984265 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359312368315 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704616246782 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023662143632 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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