Nowadays, many adults play video games. Is it good or bad development? Give you opinion and include relevant examples from your personal experience
In the current era of growing mobile technology, adults are addicted to video games more than the teenagers which can be seen in two ways either bad or good evolution. In my opinion, the developments of video games are not causing any effects on adults. However, enslavement on games will certainly put negative impact.
Now, on the first hand, to built out video games are not to be called as bad. To support this statement there are multifarious reasons. First, most of the adults were used to play video games on portable devices such as mobile, laptops. Usually they used mobiles to entertain themselves. So to revitalize after a long days work, one can simply used to play video games. Secondly, in modern era there are lots of new games available which are related to business development and marketing strategies. So from this they can learn new techniques. There is one axiom “Learn fast by Playing”. But, apart from all there is one drawback and can be considered as a salient one, because an addiction to particular video game can cause major damage to own personal, social and organizational life.
For an instance, as an adult considering myself at an age of 27 still playing video games, just to stimulate myself. I used to work 9 hours a day, and travel by train to work place and vice versa. So, after finishing the office hours I used to entertain myself by engaging into video game in my mobile. By doing this, I certainly feel relax and energized.
To sum up, the development of video games certainly helps adults in some manner. However, over use of this evolution will certainly damage in many parts of your life.
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Suggestion: use
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'apart from', 'such as', 'in my opinion', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227963525836 0.247107183377 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.151975683891 0.155533422707 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0851063829787 0.0946595960268 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0547112462006 0.0501214627716 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0364741641337 0.0437548338989 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112462006079 0.122226691241 92% => OK
Participles: 0.048632218845 0.0403226058552 121% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65980976752 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.048632218845 0.0326793684256 149% => OK
Particles: 0.00607902735562 0.00163938923432 371% => OK
Determiners: 0.063829787234 0.0861772015684 74% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0212765957447 0.021408717616 99% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00607902735562 0.011925033212 51% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1653.0 1933.35771543 85% => OK
No of words: 286.0 316.048096192 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77972027972 6.12580529183 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.29020979021 0.374742101984 77% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.223776223776 0.28420135186 79% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.160839160839 0.203846283523 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122377622378 0.137316102897 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65980976752 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.037074148 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.56093040696 105% => OK
Word variations: 63.5932720556 60.7387585426 105% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.8888888889 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2533642486 49.517814964 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8333333333 127.492653851 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.814263465372 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 38.2665112665 49.1944974215 78% => OK
Elegance: 1.6 1.69124875643 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180881451266 0.332605444948 54% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.100920807223 0.102741220458 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0508991611105 0.0668466124924 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.480020745953 0.534860350844 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.156434655139 0.148594505496 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633699254367 0.134430193775 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403256190923 0.0742795772207 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.264673848636 0.324371583561 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0779805121393 0.0638462369009 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117099218819 0.228012699653 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032467390101 0.058150111329 56% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 10.4468937876 153% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.