Nowadays, many adults play video games. Is it good or bad development? Give you opinion and include relevant examples from your personal experience
In the current era of growing mobile technology, adults are addicted to video games more than the teenagers which can be seen in two ways either bad or good evolution. In my opinion, the developments of video games are not causing any effects on adults. However, enslavement on games will certainly put negative impact.
Now, on the first hand, to built out video games are not to be called as bad. To support this statement there are multifarious reasons. First, most of the adults were use to play video games on portable devices such as mobiles, laptops. Usually they prefer mobiles to entertain themselves. So to revitalise after a long day of hectic work, one can simply use to play video games. Secondly, in modern era there are lots of new games available which are related to business development and marketing strategies. But, apart from all there is one drawback and can be considered as a salient one, because an addiction to particular video game can cause major damage to own personal, social and organisational life.
For an instance, as an adult considering myself at an age of 27 still playing video games, just to stimulate myself. I used to work 9 hours a day, and travel by train to work place and vice versa. So after finishing the office hours, I used to entertain myself by engaging into video game in my mobile. By doing this, I certainly feel relax and energised.
To sum up, I want to conclude that the development of video games certainly helps adults in some manner especially to overcome stress. But, up to some extent level above that it will certainly cause bad effect.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'apart from', 'such as', 'in my opinion', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.222222222222 0.247107183377 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.155555555556 0.155533422707 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0888888888889 0.0946595960268 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0571428571429 0.0501214627716 114% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0380952380952 0.0437548338989 87% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111111111111 0.122226691241 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0412698412698 0.0403226058552 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61205750085 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0603174603175 0.0326793684256 185% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00634920634921 0.00163938923432 387% => OK
Determiners: 0.0634920634921 0.0861772015684 74% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0190476190476 0.021408717616 89% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00634920634921 0.011925033212 53% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1611.0 1933.35771543 83% => OK
No of words: 280.0 316.048096192 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75357142857 6.12580529183 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.307142857143 0.374742101984 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.225 0.28420135186 79% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.160714285714 0.203846283523 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114285714286 0.137316102897 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61205750085 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.037074148 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614285714286 0.56093040696 110% => OK
Word variations: 67.9357913995 60.7387585426 112% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.5 20.7743622355 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2754189922 49.517814964 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6875 127.492653851 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7743622355 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.814263465372 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 40.0 49.1944974215 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.49367088608 1.69124875643 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169641845435 0.332605444948 51% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.100404528779 0.102741220458 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.067951661734 0.0668466124924 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.525698668049 0.534860350844 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.146940619667 0.148594505496 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644045206968 0.134430193775 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385986111473 0.0742795772207 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.276332620163 0.324371583561 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0611087058124 0.0638462369009 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111328446748 0.228012699653 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335302843144 0.058150111329 58% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.