Nowadays museums and historical sites are visited mainly by foreign tourists rather than by locals. Why is this happening? What can be done to get locals to visit museums and historical sites more often?
In this globalised era, there a colossal upsurge in the trend to see the tourist spots like museums and ancient monuments are highly visited by overseas visitors instead of the dwellers of that city. However, in this essay, I will explain the major causes and optimal solutions by analysing it.
To commence with, the familiarity of the place gives boredom to the local people's. Because they are aware of these public places where they might have been visited it over several times, hence it would become familiar and unattractive to them. Secondly, the paramount concrete reason is the high rate of visitors pass. For example, Mahabalipuram has famous monuments and temples but the cost is 600 rupees in common, which are quite huge for the middle-class people to often spent on. As a result, it makes the place to become less toured by the natives.
On the flip side, there are a plethora of options available to increase the rate of local visitors. First, the government should reduce the ticket cost for residents. For example, Taj Mahal has a separate ticket system for nonnative people and locals, where locals pay a cost of 50 rupees and tourist pays 200 rupees. Subsequently, these generous ticket fares stimulate the residents to revisit these buildings. Moreover, refurbishment and cultural activities like art exhibitions, musical play events, and so on could bring in more visitants. Consequently, the government revenue gets increased by the eternal visit of citizens and foreigners.
In conclusion, due to lack of interest and high cost, the local people neglecting to see these historical sites. Ergo, its contrary can be overlooked or curbed if the council renovate and lessen the entrance fare for these places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14084507042 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68819522593 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633802816901 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.113631274 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140877589046 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384475701457 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372752771829 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817148163713 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282373171865 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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