Nowadays people have free access to music and films online. Is this a positive or a negative development?Provide relevant examples from you own experience.

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Nowadays people have free access to music and films online. Is this a positive or a negative development?
Provide relevant examples from you own experience.

In my point of view, free access to music is the positive thing however I don’t think this will be the same for films. Around 99% of music and films were propagated through internet. most of the internet sites/apps do not pose any strict restriction on who is accessing the sites. this is the major threat for current generation of kids. there is no segregation between the content that was being viewed by the kids. Few well educated parents are aware of this and using a proper application to secure their kids from such scam. however this is not the only drawbacks of free access to music and films, the most affected people because of this are the distributers and producers of those movies. For launching a movie into theatres these people would have risked their life and spent a fortune. Their major source of taking the invested money back is from theatrical allowances and ticket costs but because of easy access of movies through online will make their customer move away from them and lean towards pirated version of the same at lower cost. In my city I have seen many such producers and distributers protesting against the pirated version of new movies and in some cases unreleased movies. They were also bankrupted and committed suicide because of the piracy issue .I would like to conclude this by saying that though free access to music and films is a boon to everyone there are also people who are being affected by the unsecured way in which it is progressing and there are also people suffering because of piracy. it would be great if necessary measures were taken against this and proper regulations may come in picture to avoid the problems in future.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, in some cases

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73720136519 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40065940069 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556313993174 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.183898364 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.666666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220079399997 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754811878636 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562002631077 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220079399997 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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