Nowadays there are many medical surveys of treatments to reduce health problems. Who should conduct them, governments, individuals or private companies, in your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience.
Presently people collide a lot of different health problems due to diseases, new dangerous viruses, inactive lifestyle, environmental pollution. Herewith high level of modern technology and science developing can encourage many medical surveys of treatments to reduce these health issues. I believe that different society subjects such as governments, individuals or private companies have opportunities and interests in medical surveys.
Firstly, the government should promote medical surveys of treatments, which have a goal to reduce health problems. The government should make finance and legal support to this medical research, for instance creating legislative base and providing budget finance for this surveys and medical science programs. The government has interest on medical exploration, because it has responsibility for welfare and health of citizens. Moreover, only government have such colossal institutional, finance and science resources for conducting/supporting these medical surveys.
In addition, private companies also can have motivation to arrange and give money for medical research. For example, business corporations can engage in developing new medication or pills and after they potentially can have a great profit in the future. Besides, private companies in some countries can get different tax benefits, if they fund and patronage medical surveys. According to trend of social responsibility of business private companies should care not only about money, but also about society and future generation.
Ordinary people find it difficult to help medical surveys, but they can participate in these researchers as a volunteers. Individuals also may disseminate information about legitimate medical researchers.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that success of reducing health problems is common issue for all social elements. In my view, governments, individuals or private companies should conduct many medical surveys of treatments to reduce health problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a volunteer' or simply 'volunteers'?
Suggestion: a volunteer; volunteers
...can participate in these researchers as a volunteers. Individuals also may disseminate infor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03873239437 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17838013424 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542253521127 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.1045812552 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.333333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239291648738 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979051229253 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843151844115 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151973233927 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831843730983 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.75 12.4159519038 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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