In the contemporary world, human beings are generating an increased amount of waste. This essay will discuss the main reasons for burgeoning waste and will suggest the effective measures legislators can take to curb the enormous waste production.
One of the most obvious reasons is the abrupt growth of the population. With the rise in world population, especially in developing countries, the consumption has been dramatically increased which goes hand in hand with garbage production. For instance, tons of waste is dumped in Pakistan on the outskirts of major cities which will remain there for several years to come. Another reason is the change in the lifestyle of the people where convenience is the utmost priority for many. General public prefers to buy packaged food which is easy to cook, but contain a certain amount of packaging that is thrown away after the food is consumed.
Governments can take several measures in order to control the quantity of waste that is generated by its population. The first viable solution is to create awareness among masses to use the products made of recyclable material and packaging. In this way, corporates would come under immense pressure to procure degradable raw materials to manufacture new products that will ultimately reduce the amount of rubbish. Another solution is to encourage industries to install recycling plants so that waste is converted into useful products. A good illustration of this is Adidas, who has recently introduced a series of shoes made entirely of ocean plastics.
To conclude, the reasons for the exponential increase in waste is clear and the constructive measures at a government level, such as public awareness and installation of recycling plants would assist in minimizing it to lowest possible extent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 248, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to curb the enormous waste production. One of the most obvious reasons is the a...
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Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: Public
...nience is the utmost priority for many. General public prefers to buy packaged food which is e...
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Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the lowest'.
Suggestion: to the lowest
...ng plants would assist in minimizing it to lowest possible extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27526132404 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86288197284 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592334494774 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5198874458 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.461538462 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0749111143557 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0251600381122 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338890966943 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0444631412249 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327211348412 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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