In the recent few decades, there has been an upsurge in the number of social issues pertaining to youngsters. Some people opine that, the key reason behind this increase is that the parents of these teen aged children dedicate most of their time at their workplace, hence they are not able to spend enough time with them. I completely agree with this notion and in this essay I will elucidate the issue and support my views with examples.
Undoubtedly, parents nowadays are struggling hard to make the both ends meet and provide a better future to their children. But while doing so, they are unable to pay proper attention to their kids. As a result, it often seen that there is nobody to correct their mistakes. Owing to which these youngsters are unable to judge between right and wrong behavior and eventually end up in acquiring a personality which is unacceptable by the society. To illustrate, these teenagers are often rebellious and short tempered. Because of these characters, they are neglected by their community and consequently are forced to live a life of isolation which are deterrent for their development.
Moreover, it is also seen that these kids often fall prey to certain habits which lead them towards a disastrous life. As working parents are always surrounded by hectic schedule, there is no one to monitor the deeds of these young minds. As a result, they get indulged in bad habits, for example, drug addiction, smoking and alcoholism. These youths when introduced into the society, may get involved in unwanted altercations and ultimately may end up in legal actions against them. If their parent's spend adequate time with their children and understand their behavior, they may not get steeped into these debilitating habits.
To recapitulate, I strongly concur that parents’ proper attention towards their children plays a crucial role in the upbringing of their offspring. If the parents do not spend ample time with them, they may become aggressive and may also get attracted towards detrimental habits.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08011869436 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70965541636 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569732937685 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9826289459 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233671706471 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724583420399 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642276529643 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148892039163 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435402300469 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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