Nowdays, some people believe advertising is useful and informative.Others believe advertising gives false information about the products and increase the price of goods.
What is your opinion?
In contemporary society, our life has been inundated with advertisements. Whether the advertising is useful and informative has triggered a heated discussion recent years.Some people hold the opinion that most of the advertising are useful tools to our daily life. However, there are also quite a few people argue that advertising could provide misleading information to consumers. As far as I am concerned, there is points in both sides of the arguments
Unemployment is a serious issue in our society, some time the root cause of this phenomenon is not only there is insufficient qualified worker but also lack of advertising by the employer. Potential employee could use advertising on news paper and website to acquire information regarding to job vacancy. By doing this, it could help employer find qualified employee thus solve issue relating to insufficient labor. Mean while, more people will be able to find a decent job and earn a good living.
On the other hand,There are also some draw back on excessive advertisement. Advertising could be a huge expenditure to a company.In order to cover the massive amount of advertising expense, Many companies have to increase their products price. This action empose an extra cost to the consumers. Mean while, some advertising board casting on TV could be very misleading to customer and cause them to make bad decision. Such as the burger of fast food advertising always looks tasty, however people always got disappointed by the actual products when the arrive the store.
From What has been mentioned above, we may see that there is some truth in both arguments, As far as I am concerned, I completely stand on the later opinion that majority of the advertisement have a negative impact to the costumer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, regarding, so, thus, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1275862069 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96945208076 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58275862069 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9250358027 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.384615385 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262489074662 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838193805971 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693754876226 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150807753495 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426793022047 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.