Nowadays, advertising is deemed instructive by some people, while others claim that advertising provides incorrect information about the goods and the price of products is increased. I comprehensively with this assertion because advertising tempts people and manipulates consumers.
Advertising can be regarded disadvantageous for the following reasons. To begin with, advertisements can create a trend that tempts people to purchase products unnecessarily. In other words, advertising has tempted people to buy their products by introducing state-of-the-art functions through their compelling advertisements. For example, every year, Apple releases a new smartphone through several eye-catching advertisements, which affect minds of consumers, and queues can be seen in front of most apple's stores to buy the latest model, even they already have a functional mobile phone. Thus, the advertisements certainly encourage people to buy products which are not the real needs and advertising industry want us to stay fashionable and follow the latest trends.
Another point to consider is that advertising industry has manipulated consumers with subliminal advertisements. To be more specific, nowadays, buyers are not aware of high frequency of advertisements, which impact on consumers' mind. According to a study, subliminal advertisements can certainly make us become familiar with a product, which leads us to consideration that we need it. It seems that people are not aware of subliminal advertising, which makes us buy products subconsciously, even the products are not good for health.
In conclusion, this essay affirms that advertising can tempt people to buy unnecessary goods and it can manipulate people to purchase products through subconscious advertisements.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92217898833 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.51207786236 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56420233463 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1326859975 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.833333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246357504083 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110029401302 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087866503265 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183790945482 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917249994164 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.06 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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