While some people state that advertising may provide some economic merits, others claim that it creates negative impacts on society and individuals. This essay agrees that advertising has detrimental effects on society.
On the one hand, some people argue that advertising allows enormous enterprises can achieve substantial profits through promoting products. To be more specific, advertising encourages consumers to purchase more, which contributes greatly to economy. For example, by motivating more buying, advertising promotes job growth and productivity growth to help meet increased demand and to enable each consumer to have more spend. Furthermore, advertising provides useful information to consumers that tells them about products. In other word, product information is provided, consumers and businesses tend to choose to purchase additional products and services. It seems to many people that advertising has positive economic impacts.
On the other hand, I side with those who state that advertising influences negatively society. The first reason is that advertising creates trends to tempt people to buy more unnecessary products. Specifically, advertising has lured people to purchase products by exaggerating the benefits of certain goods, which leads to an unhealthy lifestyle. For instance, advertising industry hires celebrities to be in their promotional advertisements. As a consequence, customers become more discontented with what they already have had and are more likely to be materialistic and waste time and money on lavish items. Moreover, advertising impacts harmfully on youth by using violence to make products appear fancier. In more detail, violent advertising can spread deceptive and false information among consumers. Therefore, advertising damages society and people negatively.
In conclusion, for many people, advertising plays a vital role in economic growth. However, I believe advertising creates detrimental effect to society and people by creating an unnecessary need and promoting products violently.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ence, customers become more discontented with what they already have had and are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.99659863946 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12027883918 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58843537415 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3616546352 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9444444444 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207288377096 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698740393822 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443056029324 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141128327252 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379171113735 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.22 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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