It is true that the traditional views of many older people are not suitable with life nowadays and some of these ideas are often seemed incompatible with the needs of young people. In my opinion, I would argue that some traditional ideas are outdated. However, I believe that others are still useful and should not be forgotten.
On the one hand, many ideas of elderly people about live and behavior are becoming less and less relevant for young people. For example, older people tend to think that we have to work in a big company and get a high paid jobs. Furthermore, they probably do not agree if their children chose being a streamer or a youtuber. On top of that, the most controversy idea is whether children have to study in university to have a successful career or not. While young people disagree with that view because they believe that university is unessential for a successful future. However, the older ones are on the opposite side.
On the other hand, some traditional views and values are certainly applicable to the modern world. For example, elderly people always do their best when they are working no matter what it is, and they will spent majority of their time for learning and working in order to make a better career. By contrast, young people often want to get rich quickly but they are not able to work hard and get less risibility of what they are doing. Moreover, always proud of one’s jobs is also a good virtue from the older generations that everyone should learn.
In conclusion, there are some obsolete ideas in the past we should discard. However, I believe that most of the other ideas are still necessary and helpful for young generations in the modern world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to be'.
Suggestion: to be
...ly do not agree if their children chose being a streamer or a youtuber. On top of tha...
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Line 4, column 206, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
...ing no matter what it is, and they will spent majority of their time for learning and...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72909698997 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44544049051 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505016722408 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8713612113 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384284473567 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122539808375 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686622281301 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244538178069 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685584823763 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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