The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree?
Raising a child is the most important role that a parent has to play. Many people believe that appropriate guidance and moral values help in reducing criminal activity in youngsters. I partially believe that only parental skills are not enough to reduce crime. There are other factors of society which contributes to the right upbringing of the child. This essay will discuss the factors which can help in decreasing wrongdoing among youngsters.
Family is the primary institution where the child starts his first learning about right or wrong. The parents impart high moral values to their children who set the base of his character. Parents need to give special attention to teenagers who are more inclined towards technology. Due to excessive use technology, teenagers are exposed to dangerous materials which may alter their actions. Mother and father need to become friends with teenagers so that open communication is established. In case of any questions or difficulty young kid should feel free to approach his parents for guidance.
It is seen that controlled or abused children tend to do more crime. Therefore caution must be taken when youngster commits any mistake and counselling should be adapted to improve them. Showing anger can make a negative effect on young children; moreover, they may start finding a way to hide things from their parents.
Another way is to keep a watch on the peer group of the teenager. In the maximum teenage influence comes from a similar age. Youths tend to copy each other to remain popular amongst friends. This can be dangerous when the negative impacts are copied such as smoking, drinking, drugs and shoplifting. Such actions are often seen as the early signs which later on develop as a criminal activity.
Lastly, education plays a pivotal role in outlining the youth’s future. Every child should attend minimum schooling year for the bright future. Illiteracy is also a factor because of which crime rates are high. Compulsory education will educate the youngster to choose the right career path.
In conclusion, good parenting is a leading force to guide youngsters towards the correct path, but education and peers are also essential fundamentals for good upbringing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... abused children tend to do more crime. Therefore caution must be taken when youngster co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, may, moreover, so, therefore, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2044198895 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65852656546 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616022099448 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.0959270711 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.5 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.70833333333 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133459536152 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357956268981 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494484419468 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0598084085843 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278528128021 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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