People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?
Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In recent years, there have been several problems that people have to cope with on a daily bases. This essay will outline the main problems in the urban areas and relevant solutions to deal with the problems.
To start with, the biggest problem is an increased level of pollution in the air has been a great issue nowadays especially for those who are living in big cities, a high number of traffic moved every day to big cities and releasing a massive number of CO2 in the atmosphere and causing degradation of fresh air. People who are living in urban areas have to face respiratory issue and disease such as lungs cancer. City resident has to face the traffic congestions as well, especially in the peak hours and most of the time they stuck in the traffic.
The same trend has been noticed in hospital and schools, whereas there will be a long queue in the health sector and families who recently moved to inner-city their children are not getting admission in the top ten ranked school/universities. Also, communities who are living in developed towns they have to face overload information such as television campaigns, social networking and most of the information is fake on these media sites and this can cause confusion.
In my opinion, the government should encourage people by delivering such as housing societies, improved infrastructure, education sector, hospitals as well and necessary amenities what they need.
In conclusion, if authorities can deliver all the necessities of life in outskirts, automatically families will shift and it will ease of the pollution of metropolitan.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ease of the pollution of metropolitan.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, whereas, as to, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06015037594 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91094961795 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593984962406 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.5867874503 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.555555556 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5555555556 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205522422657 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081007143411 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440303041798 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10031323598 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498067020674 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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