Ordinary people copy famous people whom they see on TV and magzines.DO you think its appositive development?
TV and magazines play an important role in daily life. Some people act and would like to follow characters from the Movies or the from famous books. According to me, we do this to get recognized by everyone but, In my opinion, it will have disadvantages than advantages.
On one hand, there are many disadvantages such as the person will try to do all things done by the hero character. For instance, he will follow to do the dangerous stunts done by the hero. The person who tries to follow the hero style can try to imitate those things and may lose his life. These days we heard about the zero sizes by some of the heroines in movies, I even personally felt that we will look more beautiful if we are thin. Not for me but all over the world this impacted many girls, but women also started doing the diet, exercise, and reduce their weight. Whereas, some ladies got sick and hospitalized as well according to one newspaper survey.
On the other hand, there are some advantages such as these famous people will motivate by doing charity programs. Recently in India at the time of lockdown, many celebrities did donations, helping the poor people to provide food and shelter, arranged buses to go back to their hometown. one more example of the famous heroine from India Somali bindery she did many motivational videos about the fight against cancer. Many people emotionally became stronger after seeing those videos.
To Sum up, it’s true that some people will try to follow celebrities or famous people. In my opinion, the demerits have overweighed the merits. Hence, I suggest everyone absorb good things and ignore impossible things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, so, well, whereas, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78947368421 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46506149264 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59298245614 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6206893704 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3125 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139490165428 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487104677566 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504979562288 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933886281194 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452680818665 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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