Ordinary people try to copy famous people either reading magazines or watching TV. Why do they do this? Do you think it is a good idea to copy famous people
It is commonplace for normal people to idolize important people in society, this they do by imitating their lifestyle that they see on the pages of magazines or on television. While different people have various opinions about this, I believe discretion should be applied as to which famous persons we can imitate. This essay will also attempt to answer why ordinary people attempt to be like their idols.
Some ordinary people imitate celebrities because they believe that these celebrities are a mirror of success, in other words, their desire to appear successful will make them dress like, talk like and even walk like these famous people. For instance, a lot of young normal people wear dreadlocks now to imitate their 'successful' idols who are musical artistes or sports personalities. Also, they do this to be acceptable to their peers who already have been influenced by the lives of some of these famous people. Statistics from the Map online survey has it that over 75% of people do things just because their peers are doing it.
Undoubtedly, there are some benefits of modelling your life after important personalities. It puts into perspective the power of focus; the mentees have a defined way he or she wants to live their lives and thus learns from the experience of their mentors, hence they quickly get to their desired destination in life on good time. Another good reason for copying famous personalities is the aura of self- confidence and self-actualization of seeing yourself like your idol, this propel you to achieve what they have achieved. For instance, most footballers talk about watching Thierry Henry, an Arsenal FC legend, from when they were kids and worked to replicate his success.
Despite these awesome benefits, there are some downsides to copying famous people; some of them have behaved inappropriately, exhibiting negative characters like drinking or child pornography as in the case of R. Kelly
In conclusion, while it is normal to imitate the good qualities of our superstars because they are successful, I believe caution should also be applied to discard the less desirable qualities of these famous people
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also, hence, if, so, thus, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15014164306 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75774344452 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558073654391 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.8807632707 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.846153846 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1538461538 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306065455354 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113169952199 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756158436268 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166137662015 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891490237015 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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