From past decades, scientist found that youngster learn from mother even when they are in womb. This essay how little one are affected by parents actions and how little one learns from their mistakes after parents correct them.
On the one hand, I have to agree that school boys treat their father as their role models. Firstly, they imitate all their actions and express their emotions blindly. Secondly, They are literally blank slate in which all our daily activities are captured and are played back. They learn new languages easily from mother which are tough to learn from their curriculum too. They research language
that father daily, although he never notice them and store abuse words from us. He use these words by mistake before them. Later, when Little boy talk those words he understands that it was from us.
On the other hand, I have to disagree that school boy learn most of behavior from society or environment such as in apartment, in school campus. In addition, Parent encounter they have strange practice that Parent have not taught like nail biting, stealing other stationery. Hence, as a parent, they should supervise and control their behavior from this age so they are more disciplined when they are adults. Student learn more from their school. Finally, they should be constantly monitored by parents once they reach home.
Also, Parent should correct their mistake when they are 5 year child, as it would be difficult to make them understand when they are in teenage. Further more, Children as teens, Society shapes their behavior and their likes and dislikes.
In conclusion, I agree that parent teach directly or indirectly few activities to children and they are their superstars. I also disagree that parent are strictly requesting children to be disciplined in their actions and making them more matured as an adult.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 56.0 24.0651302605 233% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0487012987 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30820865722 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529220779221 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5436205912 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3888888889 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0896945071798 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361264535935 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439499713014 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0618288538756 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607505914535 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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