Agriculture is the diminishing area in South India. People now move towards global companies like amazon, PayPal and import goods comfortably.
Most importantly, locally farmer hand made organic foods are natural, healthy and less cost. For no reason they are ignored. Moreover, Focus is now moving towards readymade food which is initially attractive. Later, we have side effects of imported foods. It causes health issues such as obesity, high blood pressure, vitamin deficiencies. Additionally, we spend more on hospital expenses.
On the contrary, people buy cosmetics, fabric, gadgets from global store which imports paying duty tax to other countries. I disgree because Consumers thereby buy products with price which are additional such as tax, delivery charges, courier charges, one day delivery prime charges. These charges are not applicable for locally sold materials. We can replace them after use. We even talk like friends with shopkeeper and rapport is higher. There are several shops that have 40-50 years of friendliness and trustworthy. They provide best fabric they have for trusting customer on their next visit.
In conclusion, I strongly agree the fact that consumers should search on quality, quantity of materials instead of moving towards imported global fabrics. Trust goes well and it improves business of local shop. It's affordable and cheaper than global products
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, well, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55140186916 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62045808857 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.742990654206 0.561755894193 132% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5289078828 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.0 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.8888888889 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.27777777778 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14213621641 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374335506938 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403215077019 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837875247829 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515143505167 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.85 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.02 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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