In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country.
Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
In this age of globalization, people have started exploring many countries for the future development of their career. While there are many upsides to this practice, there exists a few downsides too.
To embark on, there is a wider scope in education and employment, there are several reasons such as free education, higher pay scale and advanced teaching methods that has used in their educational system. Nowadays, many developed countries like Canada, UK provide free education for the students which helps their parents to save money for their children. Moreover, teaching methods have been modernized with latest technologies that has been implemented in the form of 3D smart boards, online tests and much more. In this way knowledge of the students has improved. Many people seek for jobs in developed countries were their pay scale is higher compared with the underdeveloped countries which helps them to save money for their future benefits.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks too, which affect people who move abroad for education as well as for employment. Things such as emotional problems, coping with new culture and climate issues are the major issues. Moving abroad without having a background can affected by loneliness, until they get a job or new friends from the surroundings for example people who move to New york for searching a job may be affected by loneliness as well as culture shock, because it is one of the busiest cities in the world and the most difficult thing will be coping with the culture take for instance, if a guy from a remote place in India moves to a city like London he may feel weird which takes more time to adapt with the new culture. Climate changes affect foreigners mainly who move to countries like Canada, UK where it's too cold during winter season. Therefore life is not easy for immigrants especially in the earlier stages.
To conclude there are many advantages and disadvantages, if the person who moves abroad knows well about the country and has a little background would help him to have a great life there. In my opinion moving to a developed country is a good idea for future development even though there are some drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as for, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92741935484 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6031986581 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543010752688 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.14486222 49.4020404114 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 130.928571429 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118049242781 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472702477023 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370899163376 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830675252243 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273392993149 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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