People are sleeping less than in the past. What are the effects of this? Why do people do it?

Essay topics:

People are sleeping less than in the past. What are the effects of this? Why do people do it?

it is often observed that people sleep less than in the past. The effects of less sleep on people are surrounded by various types of diseases and schedule gets disturbed. The probable reasons for this are hectic work and responsibility pressure.

having less sleep for people impacts their health and infected them with numerous hazardous diseases. people generally have a migration problem in which they could not handle severe headache and as a result, they have to consult to the physician. The fewer sleep can harm not only on a physical level in which humans feels fatigue all time but also effects on mind immensely where humans body interacted with brain diseases. if people continue to sleep less, they will have more deleterious issues related to health which distress them for the whole life. it is clear that there are huge impacts of less sleep which could be worse in the next stage.

The approximate reasons for this are the pressure of the work and the big responsibilities of their families and offices. humans wants to fulfill their responsibilities without any serious hurdles and improve the way of their lives. if they do not prove themselves or others to complete the assigned responsibilities, either they or their relatives will be suffered the negative consequences. For example, a recent survey performed by The health Department of India states that thirty-two percent of people sleep less and do hard work on day and nights and complete the duties for their families and the offices.

In conclusion, people sleep less as compare to the past because they have a lot of responsibilities, works pressure which effects on their physical and mental appearance because of this they have to suffer from dangerous diseases.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06228373702 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7652536582 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515570934256 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7174263735 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.538461538 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316165018611 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127704278211 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106327451118 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218023150019 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908750771189 0.056905535591 160% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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