People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?You should give reasons for your answer using your own

Getting admission in a college or a university is the most exciting part of anyone's life. College or University is a place which shapes and nurtures the career of an individual. However, getting into a good college or university is a factor that makes you stand out from the crowd.

In 21st century, good academics are perceived as a showcase of one's strong knowledge and domain expertise, which helps in obtaining a high paying job. As per researchers, people with graduation degree are paid more as compared to the people with primary school certificates. Individuals graduating from the top colleges are offered top positions in the firms or government sectors as compared to those graduating from community colleges.

Colleges and universities play a major role in the formation of thought process, ideology and perspective of anyone by providing competitive and conducive environment. One can learn, grasp from the masters in respective fields and impart knowledge to their friends from different regions. Group studies, debatable topics, brainstorming sessions with mates and teachers in the classrooms make studies more interesting. It prepares one for a corporate environment where one learns and helps others irrespective of religion, caste or creed.

Elicit universities and college like Harvard, Stanford or MIT have a unique selective procedure composed by the prestigious professors which ensures that students are pushed towards the competitive edge of performing extremely well in order to stand out from the crowd. This competency and research grants by professors help the students to contribute towards new technology, research and new inventions. Also, the knowledge of professors in a particular field guide students to carry their work in the right direction.

Scholarships and financial aids by universities and colleges aids individual in diligent study, which in turn results in the production of quality research work or innovations which ultimately helps humanity. Proper and a wise guidance can create wonders and a good teacher can articulate the best in diligent student.

Thereby, one must attend college and universities to experience new possibilities, explore the vastness of domain expertise, challenging colleagues and a process.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...le with graduation degree are paid more as compared to the people with primary sch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57060518732 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08603419283 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567723342939 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.26795224 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.8125 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186131429066 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587102036761 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433781368852 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951708303169 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490875069047 0.056905535591 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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