The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take?
The way 21st century has evolved in technology is significant and one of most used technology in our day to day life is
mobile phones. With time, the demand for mobile phones has become enormous and the usage of mobile phones is a boon or a curse
is still an important issue for debate.
Mobile phones have become basic need for humans and have transformed our lives to a greater extent in terms of communication and work.
Mobility of phones would be possible is something that our ancestors would not have imagined years ago. The idea of walk and talk has
created a huge impact in society unlike landline phones which have a fixed wire connection. Upgrade from normal mobile phones to smart phones is an
evolution as internet, mails, video calls/conferences and different apps can be accessed readily at ease without using laptops.
However, there are various health and social related issues with mobile. Forgetfulness, loss of memory in people have been associated
with the mobile radiations. As per researchers & scientists, radiations coming from mobile phones are not healthy for human brain and
body and hence mobile phones must be used least while communicating. Also, people who use mobile phones a longer period of time are prone
to more stress and a less social life. Because of the the availability of technical smart groups on mobile phones people spend most of their
time on mobiles and interact very less among people around them. Kids play games most of the time on mobile phones which results into weak eyesight.
With increase in mobile phones, mobile towers have also increased due to which many species of birds have dwindled because of the radiations.
To conclude on the scenario given today, disadvantages outweigh advantages of mobile phones as technology is to help community become better and healthy, if it affects
adversely on health of living beings then we all need rethink while inventing new technologies. We need to find measures that can curb ailments occuring from these
devices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, still, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08928571429 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63092820752 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1878937228 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.38176352705 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352864230024 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124044335117 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514101048531 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121410595284 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680210519002 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.