The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take?
Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Use of mobile phones has exponentially grown over the years & it has changed our lives, our communication & the way we conduct business. With positives, comes the negatives and so does with mobile phones. They are causing social & medical problems. Below we will discuss advantages & disadvantages of mobile phones.
Using mobile phones, we constantly stay in touch with our loved ones. Availability is on the go & a person can be reached at any moment. Few days back, while I was at gym, my wife informed me over my cellphone about her delayed flight & new pickup time. If there wasn’t any mobile, I would have kept waiting for her.
Mobile phones have also transformed businesses. One can track his/her investments on mobile phones in real-time & can make informed decisions. The other day, at a restaurant, I watched a news of a tech company launching a new software. I immediately called my broker and bought its stocks. Within no time, its stock prices sky-rocketed & I made good money.
If not managed well, there are downsides to everything. Using mobile phones while driving are major reasons for accidents these days. It is resulting not only in life-long medical problems but in few cases taking away precious lifes.
There are numerous social problems also associated with mobile phones. Nowadays, kids spend most of their time playing games on mobiles & are not interacting or playing with other kids resulting in social isolation.
Although use of mobile phones have certain problems but the way it has transformed everything outweighs the disadvantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...e other day, at a restaurant, I watched a news of a tech company launching a new softw...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21653543307 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85226864003 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641732283465 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9434447102 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.7368421053 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3684210526 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57894736842 7.06120827912 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310177149534 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952025439289 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864233654837 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165732685577 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741250000659 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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