People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
College admission is a very common and useful trend in various nations among the young generation. It provides the platform to work for various organizations and it helps an individual to become specialized in a particular subject. In the following paragraphs, the reasons for attending university education will be discussed in details.
Firstly, admission to get higher degree certificates is essential for the youth to attain higher levels of jobs. Almost every job opening demands higher degree certificates from an applicant as the eligibility criteria to select the right candidate for the organization or even some required masters level knowledge to choose the specific candidate according to the work profile. Therefore, youngsters decide to study in university to grab the opportunity as much as possible
Secondly, Practical skills are quite beneficial for the student which can be attained at college levels only. University level provides the prospect to a student to gain the practical skills by working on projects at different industries. Which somehow enhance the talent of an individual and help them to grow their skills. Which can be utilized in their professional career and make them successful by doing the jobs in a right manner.
In conclusion, college admission is very popular among youth individuals which fulfil the basic platform to attain their professional career. Not only this but also, some individuals do master’s degree level course to become specialized in a subject. Hands-on training is also an advantage in higher studies education which makes the candidate more confident and professionally sound. Hence, higher studies are pivotal for the current generation to make them career oriented and specialized in a particular field.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a right manner" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... make them successful by doing the jobs in a right manner. In conclusion, college admission is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, even so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49270072993 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99886537942 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547445255474 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9523237983 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.769230769 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164552877578 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631712315931 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555570796903 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109112967245 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523207588912 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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