Write about the following topic:
People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Colleges are considered to be the supreme citadel for imparting education. Many individuals are enrolled in universities for a plethora of reasons such as enhancing knowledge and gaining new experience. In my opinion, I do believe that the two main reason for attending colleges is to build a successful career and to enhance their skills and expertise.
The university degree is mandatory for people to get jobs in multinational companies. The organizations do not offer jobs to people without university education. Moreover, college certification aids people in building a successful career and growth in their professional life. They help people to get promote to higher job positions with handsome salary. To elucidate, according to the recent report more than 80 percent of jobs are offered to people who acquire higher education and degree from institutes.
Furthermore, people prefer to get enrolled in colleges as they help in developing the skills and experience that will help them to compete with others. The colleges organise programs, training campaigns, seminars to teach students listening, communication and presentation skills which is mandatory in jobs. Additionally, they organise industrial trip to factories and big companies to give them the practical experience of work life and environment. To exemplify, colleges makes it mandatory for students to prepare presentations and research projects which enhance their speaking and writing skills.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that people attend to colleges to not only to construct a prosperous professional career but also aids in increasing their understanding, expertise and erudition.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65737051793 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18971020664 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569721115538 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9001531403 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.230769231 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321972745728 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114384507925 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669864543142 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191843219767 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789818436617 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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