People listen to music for different reasons and at different times. Why is music important to many people? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
It is certainly true that masses use to listen music in their life. some people listen it to relax their mind, while others for entertainment purposes when they get time. In this essay, I will shed light on the supportive ideas that why mortals show their interest in music.
To begin with, music plays a crucial role in the life of human beings as it is the better source to relax the mind. Nowadays, people are becoming money minded and having hectic schedule through week days. In this way, they felt restless and do not focus on their jobs appropriately and hence they prefer to listen music which acts as a stress buster. To illustrate, doctors who are quite busy for the treatment of patients everyday and only on Sunday, they listen different genres of music for the refreshment of their brain and soul. As a result, they look after the ill person in an effective way through the following days.
On the other hand, some mortals having an interest to listen music for entertainment. Such as people celebrate some special events namely birthday or marriage ceremonies and they do not want it tbe monotonous. Furthermore, they got opportunity to enjoy the day with their near and dears by dance on the sound of music. For example, in my homeland, youngsters have strong desire to make the days special and remembrance on the particular occasions and they hire DJ sound to entertain their life. As a result, music is the best source to entertainment.
In conclusion, it is the personal choice of the public to listen music at different time as it is helpful for the relaxation of mind and entertain the life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, look, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71731448763 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57511606819 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551236749117 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1541191717 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3571428571 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239505457043 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913215393096 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560520073031 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170991139784 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03526646597 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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