It is irrefutably true that availability of free space near the town can be utilized for various purpose, that's why some individuals of society admit that deteriorate environment issues may be mitigates by adopting new trees in suburb areas; however others consider that enhancing houses in free place is alleviate the obstacle of living houses.But my views are with the synchronization of former thoughts reason will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs
To outset, degrading environment troubles is grown because of numerous vehicles which omit smoke, it pollutes the environment so that planting trees has become major need in the contemporary era which can observe carbon dioxide and release oxygen,this gas necessary for human living. According scientist servery a 100 trees can release million of tons oxygen in the year. Moreover, If rain water can be observed, and it filtered by ground, it will reduce the of drainage as well as shadow of trees may be used in order to park vehicles, playground ans so on.On the top of that, air conditioners need may be mitigated by over shadow of the trees because it control on global warming which escalate the temperature of the planet.
On the other sides of the coin, burgeoning population problem will not tackle unless more houses developed in the vacant area of cities in the developing countries, in these countries public are living in the open ares under the sky roof so that increasing house is the useful idea to solve it .
To encapsulate, given aforementioned information, it is abundantly clear that, although increasing house can meet the need of burgeoning population, but protecting environment is more instrumental in many ways. If inhabitants of the country began their contribution to overcome the issue of pollution then government can built houses for needy people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19127516779 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93784488016 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624161073826 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 215.405560642 49.4020404114 436% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 257.833333333 106.682146367 242% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.6666666667 20.7667163134 239% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223872182707 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919923137887 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532959278978 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11841769426 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421490039571 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.8 13.0946893788 212% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.28 50.2224549098 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.71 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.94 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 62.0 9.78957915832 633% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 62.0 10.7795591182 575% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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