pollution awareness
Pollution, it is a debatable topic, which predominantly devastate the planet slightly day by day. Thus, the impact, a lot of factors would change in the human life cycles. I strenuously agree that the notion, which causes and completely ravaged the bio -environment if the people would not pause the habits that contrary to the earth.
Firstly, In the modern life, everything has changed to machinery which facilitate the people chores as effortless. For instance, the usage of refrigerator,Air- cooler and vehicles which releases the smoke emission called chlorofluorocarbon and carbon monoxide. Hence it contaminate the air and drill the ozone depletion, therefore, the UV rays which are exposed by the sun light causes catastrophe and skin cancer. Even though, curtailment of using the electronic product is the solution to be followed, Which reduces the environmental destruction. Moreover, masses stop consuming the products such as plastics, silicon cover etcetera, which will not get degrade to the soil.
Secondly, Deforestation, which mean the cutting the trees from the forest and make them to barren land. Therefore,the bare area get easily warmed and causes the global warming, Which is the major dilemma of today's fact. For example an intense introspect from the researches, which examine the north Indian ice region could melt the glaciers because of temperatures,Hence it enhance the sea level which disturb the people's next generation. Furthermore, government could implement the by passing the laws and try to make the situation improve and implement the rule that reduce to use the nature-disturbing stuffs.
To sum up, environment is the most precious things that we have, which everyone would care and aware about how product the planet that helps our future could be prevailed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Air
... For instance, the usage of refrigerator,Air- cooler and vehicles which releases the...
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Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...chlorofluorocarbon and carbon monoxide. Hence it contaminate the air and drill the oz...
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Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'contaminates'?
Suggestion: contaminates
...orocarbon and carbon monoxide. Hence it contaminate the air and drill the ozone depletion, ...
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Line 4, column 113, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... and make them to barren land. Therefore,the bare area get easily warmed and causes ...
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Line 4, column 364, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Hence
...elt the glaciers because of temperatures,Hence it enhance the sea level which disturb ...
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Line 4, column 374, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'enhances'?
Suggestion: enhances
...aciers because of temperatures,Hence it enhance the sea level which disturb the peoples...
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Line 5, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at helps our future could be prevailed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37455830389 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0670156788 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65371024735 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1687340772 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0208469659113 0.244688304435 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00668832455241 0.084324248473 8% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0231690358846 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0217370547953 0.151304729494 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376496833124 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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