By punishing murderer with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing
murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderer.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. you should write at least 250 words.
Life Imprisonment considered to be preferable form of penalising the murderers, as people living in the society feel guilty of committing murder when any prisoner is sentenced to death. I agree with this statement because it allows the criminals to undergo the hardships in the prison and also it gives them a chance to realise their mistake.
Firstly, the criminals need to undergo the hardships in the prison on a daily basis. This includes their involvement in extreme physical labor, sleepless nights, bad diet, harsh weather conditions and inhuman treatment by the police at certain instances. At times they also have to spend their days without sufficient food and water. This seems to be very challenging and hard for them for instance, a criminal commits murder is put a cell where he is not provided with any of the basic amenities required by a normal person.
Secondly, giving a chance to realise their mistake will boost up the possibilities of the criminals to end up being good human beings. Some who repent on their mistakes are more likely to change their attitudes positively. They also sometime try and motivate other fellow persons to take the right path. This enables in creating a positive environment in the prison. For example, if a person had committed a murder unintentionally he should be considered forbidden for his crime, so that any tie in future he will conscious about his behaviors.
In conclusion, I believe that giving life imprisonment to the the criminals is considered to be beneficial than sentencing them to death.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04633204633 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84067570132 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606177606178 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7264663212 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.916666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199811905118 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068848059824 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559649669248 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129151858382 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609020298486 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.