With the recent improvement to internet, people can leave views or opinions on certain goods or services they have purchased. it is good n=or bad thing. discuss both
Technology has affected all aspects of our life and one of them is the way we do shopping through internet. There is no doubt that in correct circumstances, this is a valuable tool. However, if used for the wrong purpose, it becomes dangerous weapon and detrimental to both individual and corporate business.
Technology has eased out our life tremendously. Nowadays, we do not need to go into the hassle of mega shopping complexes, rather we can buy any product or services, within the walls of our homes and in the comfort of our beds. All major brands have their exclusive websites, so customer can compare prices among different products and sellers. Anything can be bought by the click of a button and delivered at out doorstep and payments are also processed through credit cards.
The trend of buying anything online has gained a momentum as we do not need to spare time for shopping from our hectic work schedule. However, there are companies, who is taking advantage of this trend by selling fake things. They make their websites, flashy and attractive, marketing department of companies uses different shades of light and online software to modify them completely. Sometimes the product delivered is totally opposite of what we see online.
To overcome this threat and spending an enormous amount of hard earned money on fake products, reviews and opinions left by previous buyers gives us gist of information about the product, how’s the quality?, is it worth the money?, How it works?, How it looks in real?- because customers sometimes posts the photos of bought clothes, shoes, gadgets and accessories. These help upcoming customers in decision making to buy best bet and also companies get feedback and know the demand, which helps them incredibly to tailor their production and marketing strategy according to the demand of customers.
Having thought about it, I believe opinions and reviews are extremely essential and helping other fellow buyers to have complete and comprehensive information about the product or service. This will also demotivate fake companies and compels them to make and sell competitive products.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 287, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to make and sell competitive products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18624641834 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72902141835 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610315186246 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.2690537451 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.666666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0587050374901 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0185978302271 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0217766147308 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0344971974763 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186404526645 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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