Shopping has become new favorite past-time of young generation. Why is this case. should you encourage them to develop other habits.
Teenagers and youngsters do not know the value of time and inclined to waste it while doing non-productive activities. Recently, there have been a steep upward trend in passing time while buying stuff to show-off that they do not need. I believe, this would draw a huge detrimental impact on their life and our society.
The better days of the economy have resulted in children having an enormous amount of disposable money. This is spent without a second thought because of the number of factors. Firstly, they feel under pressure from schoolmates, friends and colleagues to look trendy and fashionable, otherwise, they feel inferior and scared of being outcast or bullied or criticized. Secondly, technology has incredibly changed the way we do things including shopping. All brands- international as well as local- has their own website. Where you can buy after comparing prices from a wide range of products and buy only after scrutiny at competitive prices and the highest of quality at the click of a button. In addition to this, payments are also processed through credit cards and product is delivered at your doorstep.
On the other hand, Latest gadgets, mobiles, clothes, shoes and accessories have negligible affect anyone’s long term life and these things are only superficial, giving the temporary satisfaction of achievement and long-term depression. Money and time should be spent on things, which makes us more mature, knowledgeable and intelligent. Nowadays, the world is full of competition in schools, universities and the workplace and only the fittest can survive. There is constant pressure to meet deadlines and the best at communication skills. Therefore, Teenagers should invest this time to learn practical skills, which can in turn help them tremendously later in their work-life. Technology has changed the way of learning and anyone can learn through online courses. Additionally, they can form habits to ultimately strengthen family bond like gardening and helping parents around the house. Finally, the world is full of beautiful places and travelling makes you mature and open your perspective, therefore, travelling around country is the best habit in free time.
In conclusion, i strongly believe that buying without any reason is a total waste of time and time is money, so it should be spent carefully and, on such tasks, which in turn helps you to achieve your goals and get ahead of the rat race of this world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the Latest'.
Suggestion: , the Latest
...d at your doorstep. On the other hand, Latest gadgets, mobiles, clothes, shoes and ac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2070.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21410579345 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84131428979 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604534005038 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5667495466 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.947368421 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8947368421 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15789473684 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11378041727 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0306088122586 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364295753926 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0723830021425 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305434458953 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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