In recent years , many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping.
Is this a positive or negative development ?
In the current scenario, several small shops have shut down as there is a preference for big shopping complexes over them. In my opinion, I agree that this development is positive as it is beneficial to both society and the government.
There are umpteen reasons why individuals do shopping in the large shopping plazas. Primarily, in contrast to the small-scale stores where the shopkeepers sell goods at the price of their own convenience and there is no guarantee that the purchaser will get the original product, there is fixed price on the shops in malls, as, one has not to waste time in doing bargaining or fight for the correct price of the product. Also, the customer can return the bought goods easily as there is not much hassle in branded stores.
Furthermore, there are multiple stores at one place and customers do not have to travel to different places if they have to buy myriad products. In other words, the malls have a plethora of shops such as clothes, grocery, food joints and people can have better shopping experience, as local shops do not provide multiple things in one place. For example, In Chandigarh's Elante mall, people can enjoy shopping and food in one place. If they feel hungry while buying clothes, they can go to the food court.
Another point of significant importance is that the authorities will be benefitted by this approach. Unlike, local stores, if many people go to the shopping center for purchasing things, they will travel by their cars. When they reach there, they have to park their vehicles at the paid parking spots and this will provide a monetary benefit to the city administration.
In conclusion, according to the above-mentioned analysis, it is more helpful if there are more large-scale shopping complexes than small ones.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in contrast to, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93377483444 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6963972832 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549668874172 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0612052587 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.615384615 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349321486389 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119177039641 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770045545097 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174295224173 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365450006807 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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