Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.
It it sometimes argued that the we's character influenced on our personality and development when we was born then any experiences we may have in our life. But I believe that life's experiences more significantly and my essay will prove this thing
On the one hand, can as say that characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development is not wrong. For example, we was born in a rich family, we have to a lots of money and good life, so maybe our character is funny and happy. In contrast, when we was born a poor family, we live in a bad life, our character will feel sad and live in complexity life. Another for instance, the person who lived in a happy family will influenced by good personality such as sociable and kind than the person who lived in a broken family will feel boring and sad.
On the other hand, other people believe that life's experiences more significantly than influence on personality and development. family condition, education and life's experiences has deeper effect on a person's character. For example, the people who lived in a poor life will feel boring and complex . However, day by day, we can a lots of money by experience in our life and then become a rich people. As a consequence, we was born in a family has a good education, but we make friend with many bad people. Maybe we will formed bad character.
In conclusion, I agree that people's character influenced by personality and development, but I think that life's experiences is more significant than personality. Although we was born how in a family, we need to become a good person to development society.
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Researchers believe that our
Researchers believe that our personality and development are dependant on the conditions we are born in rather than the experiences we have in our lives. I believe that the situations we go through have a greater impact on our character and personality and this essay will discuss my views on this.
It is true that genetics do play an important role in the way we develop. For example, on one hand, a mother who smokes cigarettes and drinks alcohol will obviously have a negative impact ln the way a child is born. Sometimes, this negligence can lead to severe damage resulting in conditions like autism, down syndrome and other birth-related diseases. On the other hand, a mother who is extremely cautious during her pregnancy has a greater chance of having a healthy offspring who could grow up to be a good person.
But the upbringing of a child and the experiences he/she has growing up has a greater influence on the way they turn out to be. Even if a person is born with a very optimistic attitude and the people around him are pessimists, there is a good chance that the person's attitude might turn into a pessimistic one. In the same way, if a person is born to a criminal, the upbringing of that person can help him to not become one himself as he could learn a lesson from the mistakes of his criminal parents and avoid making them.
In conclusion, I feel that even though the characterstics that we are born eith do have an effect on our personality, the lessons we learn from our experience and surrounding have a greater impact on our character.
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but, however, if, may, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66435986159 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91593677521 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.42214532872 0.561755894193 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3689167476 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.692307692 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.523371200106 0.244688304435 214% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.211606559576 0.084324248473 251% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143535259212 0.0667982634062 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.377803110697 0.151304729494 250% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879856711467 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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