Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples
It is true that people have generic characteristics since birth. The born characteristics play a major role in one's life enhancing the personality. This essay will analyse the reasons of this influence from western and eastern part of the world to demonstrate points and support my arguments.
People have their own way of living. They do not like to compromise their inner personality. They go to the very extent to fulfill their dreams. Those people who do their best for what they want to do have the inner satisfaction even though they do not get enough fame or money. They believe that their natural interest is the one they are born for. For example, famous tennis player Roger Federer has never thought to be an iconic personality not only for youngsters but a great motivation for others. They just have strong intuition to follow their natural characteristics of personality.
Recent studies showed that people with split personality issues occurring due to conflict of interests developed between him and the people surrounding. For example, instant family members have a great influence on our lives such as career choosing decisions where parents might have a future plans for their children but there is a possibility that their children have their own options. This arises when the personality and desiring for development conflicts with practical experiences. However, it should not be forgotten that external matters do affect the human brains extensively and can change the whole personality he may have since birth. Taking the example of underdeveloped countries like India and Pakistan, people are way exhausted to overcome their basic needs and therefore, in order to support their needs and feed the extra mouths of their family, the personality and developed phase become obscure and die out somewhere in the corner. Likewise, in the western part of the world naming Australia, Canada, U.S provides the opportunity to their youngsters to chase their dreams and therefore they do not require to compromise their natural talents.
It is generally believed that inner personality should not at all be compromised as the whole life depends on one decision. If you take the right decision for yourself then you are the most satisfied person on the face of this earth and one wrong turn may ruin your personality and development would remain mere a dream.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, likewise, may, so, then, therefore, for example, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1997.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14690721649 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76887502081 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55412371134 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8275653943 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.944444444 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229219066239 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764437467688 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042410537214 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14420926625 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161101667095 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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