Increase in the number of individual cars on road is directly proportional to increase in air pollution, sound pollution, and decrease in availability of space on roads. It is the one the important factor that reduces the life expectancy.Developed cities has overcome this situation by using other means of public transport such buses, trains etc.Let us discuss about advantages of using public transport.
Firstly, By using public transport we can reduce the number of vehicles on the road by which traffic jams would be minimal. In Capital city of India called Delhi, the government has decided to reduce the number of vehicle movements on road.They introduced new rule called Odd/Even numbers.The vehicles with odd numbers at the end would moving on Monday,Wednesday and Friday. Even numbers movement would be on other days.Citizens traveled in public transport or arranged car pool which reduced amount of traffic in city and vehicle used to travel in an order.
Secondly, Roads needs to expanded due to the rise in number of personal vehicles. For preparation of it, Many trees are cut down due which pollution gets increased.Public transportation usage does not require expansion of roads. let us take an example of Rome, a beautiful city of architecture. Due to sudden rise in self driven vehicles air and sound pollution rose.
Many monuments where losing its captivity and glow. Government of decided to use less personal vehicle in inner part of city. They allowed on government buses movement inside the city.
Finally, I conclude that Quality of life in cities can only be increased by its people thinking in an aspect of environment. Less use of personal transport, more benefits to the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18345323741 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07378889128 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58273381295 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 72.1066917838 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0625 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0625 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218051120024 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636202377887 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596408321741 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116645642779 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566409340274 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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