Road transport is taking over rail services. Discuss the positive and negative effects of this development. Is this situation true for your country?
Advancement in technology and globalization has change the facet of life and revolution in transportation system is no exception. Advocates are of the view that road network is superseding the public transportation like railways. This essay intends to elucidate both advantages and disadvantages in following paragraphs along with scenario in my own nation.
To commence with, there are enormous benefits of private Road network. Firstly, it result in time-saving for commuters. As dedicated and short routes are feasible to build to provide home to office connectivity. It is out the daily hassle of reaching the office. Secondary, traveling by own vehicle provides flexibility. Therefore, traveler can choose their own timings instead of fixed timetable as set by the railway department. To justify this, a recent study in this surge of car sales of Honda reveals that sixty percent people prefer to travel at their own convenience because of the time flexibility in traveling. Last but not the least, Road network is not halted by bad weather conditions. There because of the around the year availability, road vehicles are more preferable as compared to the counterpart.
On the contrary to this, pollution and traffic jam are major drawbacks of road transportation. Although there are plethora of reasons for Environmental degradation, motor pollution topmost candidate in all this as fuel used in vehicles releases greenhouse gases in surrounding. Consequently, global warming is increased. Additionally, myriad of four wheeler causes traffic jam because majority of humankind have same starting and closing office times. Therefore, it result in people waiting in heavy traffic.
However, in my country most of people go by rail, if they want to travel long distance and for shorter distance two or four wheeler are preferred.
Tu recapitulate, the aforementioned statements provides plausible argument in favour and against of road network. However, my vote goes to rail services because of convenience and safety reasons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, therefore, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50955414013 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1510707105 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624203821656 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2287521034 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164425817086 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409118410911 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378030651101 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836879056777 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178004581843 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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