Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?
It is irrefutable that a country's growth depends on how educated its inhabitants are and how healthy they are. The burgeoning population of the nation makes it quite harder for the ruling authority to bear the expenses of their needs. I believe that an effective solution would be to divide the expenditures between the government and the individuals. I will support this view with arguments in the following paragraphs.
Education, nowadays, plays a vital role in the development of a society. Not only it creates job opportunities, but also help in making people more aware of the socio-economic issues of the country. Making education free till the age of 18 would encourage the pupils to clear their secondary education at least. For instance, the percentage of students enrolled in grade 10 in 2011 has increased by 19% as compared to 2009, when the government exempted fee of students in class 10.<br><br>Moreover, healthcare system can also be improved by providing either health insurance or schemes that covers more than 50% of the cost of the misfortune. It will not only reduce the fear of facing difficulties but will also contribute towards the mitigation of crimes committed by people in difficult times. Furthermore, a healthier society can help the nation to achieve greater heights and make it proud. Consequently, the economic growth will get bolstered.
To conclude, with the implementation of the said measures there would be no burden on either the government or individuals. Both the government and individuals can go hand in hand to cope with this and build an enlightened and healthy nation.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, at least, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15151515152 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1458190803 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2024612016 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.615384615 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115228867053 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332157071318 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323907870519 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709865634982 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228413779305 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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