Should people get a job right after school or should they attend university? Discuss both and give your opinion.
As education and employment plays an increasingly more central role in our lives, it has been suggested that there has been an unprecedented incline in people who not only tend to get jobs but also pursue next level of education. While some believe that it is vital to get a job after schooling, I assert that having a higher degree will provide better settlements.
Even though getting a job after passing out from high school is but tedious task, it will be completely foolish not to recognize the perks of having a job. People can earn money at early ages; as a result, they can look after their families. But most of the students will not have a good time in finding new jobs, as many companies are now looking for experienced people. This leads to a deadlock situation between fresh grads and companies. Instead, organizations are looking for highly skilled people.
Nevertheless, if the student’s perspective is to pursue higher education, this could lead to an extension of his skills and knowledge. As most of the companies are having a scarcity of high degree holders, they are open for taking these people who have no experience, where their fresh high degree cognitive skill will help increase the prospect of the company. The curriculum of the latest technology in universities will help the students to find the dream job. Furthermore, a higher degree will have higher pay. Thus, having a higher education instead of working as an employee is not underestimated.
Despite there are many people who are working after completing their high school studies, it is an absolute imperative to have a higher degree, so that the people will be recognized. Companies should also support employees of pursuing higher education
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, nevertheless, so, thus, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97594501718 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80170959353 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549828178694 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7269237448 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.428571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151749766679 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526108131887 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050394865887 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10481925462 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354187055511 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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