Should private schools receive government funding?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Undoubtedly, a portion of the populace vocalizes that the supremacy should devote the hefty chunk of their budget to the privately run institutions. Even though some of private school are in their initial ages so they need colossal amount of funds, I cogitate that these organisations do not require any government aid because these are working as autonomous bodies and also operating by the venturists on money driven approach.
Being private schools, they charge and accumulate the hefty amounts of fund in the form of tuition fees, admission fees, penalties and miscellaneous fees. Since these institutions are self reliant, self financed and self managed, thus state should not take step forward to extend their helping hand. Also it is biased to overlook the fact documented by The American School Association that after deeply analyzing the financial statements and profit driven approach, the U.S.A government has withdrew its plan to support them financially. Hence,instead of providing the financial support to private owned schools, administrations should channelized their precious funds into other productive purposes.
On the top of that, these privately owned institutions continuously concentrate on deriving huge money form their ventures. Seemingly, the education is one of the booming sectors with high revenue in all over the world, thus business tycoons are proliferating their stakes in the educational sectors by infusing huge money. Being a center of attraction among businessmen, the paucity of funds would not arise in these organisation. To exemplify, as per the survey carried out by New York Times, in the gone calendar year, stability and high margins in privately owned schools are gravitating the angle investors from all
around the globe to invest in schools which eventually leads to high pooling of funds.
In conclusion, although in formative age the private schools need financial assistance to enhance their operations, they collects hefty funds by charging a lot to students . Being one of the best investment options, they usually attack massive funds from public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, so, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50920245399 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90623834612 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604294478528 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.0533905972 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.666666667 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150762624818 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554835342068 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294099531905 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787531454335 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027635410662 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.