Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep.”
What problems can lack of sleep cause?
What can be done about lack of sleep?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this contemporary era, everyone busy with their work, personal life and business to fulfilling dream owing this they are doing more efforts and extensive hard-work round the clock, therefore are not able to take appropriate sleep which is require them to recharge and rejuvenate everyday. I am going to explain to the exact reasons and preventive steps to overcome the sleeping issue.
To begin with, advancement of the technology people are occupied with their customers, owing to this they are not able to focus on foods as well as on good habits, to cite an example, exercises, walks and Yoga's. As a result whenever those persons reached home they are not spending quality time with their family and continue to work for companies and customers. Consequently, employees are facing target completing pressure, which is the main reason to not let them sleep. Owing to this non sleeping situations, people are getting ill and they are getting trapped into multiple problems, such as obesity, high blood pressure, and some time depression also.
In addition to this, most of businessman are also impacted with sleep related problems, The main reason behind it that they want attract more customers, therefore, they need to find out the different ways to reach large numbers of consumers, thus business man need to think more to search ideas to enhanced their business, which is also the root cause for those people to not sleep at suitable and health sleep cycle.
Moreover, according to my school to thoughts, there are various ways to overcome the sleep related issues, First and foremost, individuals should focus on their life style, including with regular exercises as well they should take some spare moments with their family members and friends, so they can reduce stress. As a result, their mind will think about jobs and responsibilities, therefore they will take deep sleep which would be beneficial for their health.
Subsequently, employers should also grants some mandatory leaves to every employees and should give holidays vouchers to promote the work life balance culture.
In conclusion, despite the fact of that, works and businesses are very important to become wealthy person but according to famous person quote "Health is Wealth". I also in favor to complete the task on time and enjoy your life as well maintain the healthy work life balance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2005.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15424164524 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61097490359 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562982005141 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.5124768859 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.083333333 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4166666667 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9166666667 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177232672569 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682567051782 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448112896872 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.086722128541 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515062166143 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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