You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other You don t fully agree with this opinion Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper In your letter say which points

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You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion.

Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter
say which points in the article you agree with.
explain ways in which your town-center is different from most other town centers.
offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter regarding the article which, you have written in national newspaper. In that article you have mentioned about the town Centre. First of all, I would like to appreciate your effort and special thanks for that.
Furthermore, you have written very informative article related to my town centers. I could not stop my self to read complete passage as well as I feel that most of the information’s mentioned accurately. Nevertheless, I found some wrong information regarding the town Centre. Firstly, you have mentioned in article that all the town centers are looking for same types. Although, it is not true, because town Centre have their unique qualities as well as different structure.
Secondly, some centers have multiple floors, on the other hand, some canters constructed till ground floor only.
Last but not the least, some town centers design has cumbersome structure, also they reflect diverse qualities.
Moreover, I would like to emphasize you, to visit my town city center and, I am affirmative sure that, you would change your opinion once you see the eloquent design of town Centre.
It would be grateful if you can reply to this letter.

Sincerely,
Kuldip Kumar

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, i feel, as well as, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14356435644 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67085057608 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633663366337 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5236414629 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9230769231 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5384615385 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6153846154 4.34317383033 290% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313577847069 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109357222939 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833470098483 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153698389707 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091028343019 0.0580467560999 157% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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